Microsoft and Taiwanese Government to cooperatively develop the cloud computing market

[Above image: Microsoft and Taiwanese Government to cooperatively develop the cloud computing market. Head of Legislative Yuan and Head of Ministry of Economy are among those in the picture.]

I need your help to polish the points made here. I trust my FS fellows, both in terms of knowledge and good will, much better than the ICT (Information and Computer Technology) professors in Taiwan who might come forward as self-appointed cloud specialists while serving as corporate salesmen selling questionable commodities. In fact I expect that this article might eventually be challenged by the latter group since it will help the consumers see the absurdity of such extreme costs in a technology that was claimed to save people money. It is also a good opportunity to introduce wiki as both a piece of FS and a successful way for the FS community, and free culture community in general, to cooperate globally. An additional benefit is to leverage the cloud hype against Microsoft's Office 2010, which might otherwise force the patent-encumbered docx's way into the public through their ignorance.

So please bear with me. I will switch to the boring mode for the non-FS, non-ICT-trained readers in the main article "Wiki As an Example to Demystify Cloud Computing". Please leave your suggestions for improvement there. Thank you!